Persuasive writing- why do we need pets

We have been having a go at writing a piece of persuasive writing. Here is my piece of writing  about why we should have pets.

Title A Short Statement about pets topic. eg. sho	WHY DO WE NEED PETS
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	Why do we need pets ? we need pets to helps find  out items and  help the police if we didn’t have pets it would be sad and we wouldn’t get fit.
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	firstly Police dogs police dogs are super helpful if we didn’t  have them people will get away with crime. lots of cops need help with getting people they also sniff the pockets  so the won’t carry anything banned or anything that is not  allowed into the country.
	secondly Airport dogs help with looking and sniffing out banded items this is a good job for pets and if we didn’t have these pets people could bring banned items into the country we are lucky that we have trained dogs that help us
	thirdly some trained dogs help people with disabilities like blind people.They are trained when they are born they help people get fit and make them happy. I love pets and it would be a shame if  they had to go.
Concluding statement Summing it up.  A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.

persuasive writing- why should we fix our feld

We have been having a go at writing a piece of persuasive writing. Here is my piece of writing  about why we should fix our field.  

Title A Short Statement about the topic. eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’	Save Our Field !!!!!!!
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	I strongly advise that we need  to get the field back we would not get fit and we need to train for sport and also do  cross country.  Most of the space in our school is used for the feld.
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	secondly it is constantly boggy a lot of the time it was out of use. We should make use of all our sports equipment and the money is going to waste we use our money to pay for bus trips camps etc we could fundraise for the field.
	Thirdly we do lots of special events like the hangi but when the field is to wet and damp we can’t do special events on the field we need our field back urgently.
	finally we could make use of all of the sports equipment and most of the money is going to waste a large part of the school is also going to waste.  MAKE OUR FIELD GREAT AGAIN !!! 😃😀😃😀😃😀
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My Marine Mammal Information Report

We have been learning how to write a information  report. Here is my report on a Marine Mammal.

How To Look After Our Rocky Shore bu

We have been using our reading skills to learn about our rocky shore. Here is  some work I  did showing  how we can look after our rockey shore


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Rocky Shore Animial Work

We have been using or reading skills across the

curriculum to learn about the rocky shore. Below is some work I did about a rocky shore creature that I was interested in.

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My Sea Week Writing

For Sea Week we wrote about why the ocean is important here is my writing work.Please leave  and kind, positive and thoughtful comment.

My Chance and Probability Work

This term we have been learning about chance Probability in maths Here is my DLO  about chance and probability please leave a kind and positive and thoughtful comment.