Persuasive writing- why do we need pets

We have been having a go at writing a piece of persuasive writing. Here is my piece of writing  about why we should have pets.

Title A Short Statement about pets topic. eg. sho	WHY DO WE NEED PETS
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	Why do we need pets ? we need pets to helps find  out items and  help the police if we didn’t have pets it would be sad and we wouldn’t get fit.
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	firstly Police dogs police dogs are super helpful if we didn’t  have them people will get away with crime. lots of cops need help with getting people they also sniff the pockets  so the won’t carry anything banned or anything that is not  allowed into the country.
	secondly Airport dogs help with looking and sniffing out banded items this is a good job for pets and if we didn’t have these pets people could bring banned items into the country we are lucky that we have trained dogs that help us
	thirdly some trained dogs help people with disabilities like blind people.They are trained when they are born they help people get fit and make them happy. I love pets and it would be a shame if  they had to go.
Concluding statement Summing it up.  A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.